Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

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Offered by Deep B.

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Cambridge MPhil, Harvard MBA, Warwick PPE | Expert Coach for Top UK Unis

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Package Description:

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Application Strategy

Essays


Deep B.

Offered by Deep B.

Joined November 2024

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Cambridge MPhil, Harvard MBA, Warwick PPE | Expert Coach for Top UK Unis

For nearly a decade, starting at the age of 22, I have helped students successfully navigate the UK university admissions process. From crafting compelling personal statements to excelling in interviews and understanding key questions, I guide applicants in selecting the right mix of universities based on their GCSE, A-level, or IB performance. I also specialise in supporting international students, helping them understand what is achievable within the UK system and positioning themselves for success. Having personally gained admission to top UK universities, including Cambridge, LSE, Warwick, and Exeter, I bring firsthand experience to the process. As a graduate of two leading UK institutions—Cambridge (MPhil) and Warwick (PPE)—and later, as an international student who successfully navigated the US admissions process to earn an MBA with Distinction from Harvard, I understand how to stand out in highly competitive applicant pools. My students have consistently secured places at prestigious universities such as Oxford, LSE, and UCL. With deep insight into the admissions system and a proven track record of success, I am committed to helping students unlock their potential and achieve their academic goals.

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