Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

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Offered by Annie P.

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Brown University Class of 2020 Magna Cum Laude graduate | Ivy League admit

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Studied at Brown University

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Package Description:

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Application Strategy

Essays


Annie P.

Offered by Annie P.

Joined April 2025

5.0

Brown University Class of 2020 Magna Cum Laude graduate | Ivy League admit

As an international admit from Vietnam who successfully navigated the highly selective U.S. college admissions process, I secured acceptance to Brown University, where I graduated Magna Cum Laude with dual degrees in Economics and Development Studies, achieving a perfect 4.0 GPA. Having personally experienced and overcome the unique challenges faced by international applicants—especially as a woman pursuing data science, AI/ML, and economics—I deeply understand how to craft powerful personal narratives, compelling essays, and strategic positioning essential for admission to top-tier colleges. My extensive mentorship experience at Brown, McKinsey, and through community initiatives equips me to effectively guide students in showcasing their authentic strengths, highlighting their diverse backgrounds, and navigating admissions with confidence and clarity.

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5h+ of coaching

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