Write a Powerful Personal Statement

Write a Powerful Personal Statement

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Offered by Alan Y.

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USC MD/MBA | Ex-McKinsey, Accenture, Deloitte, Kaiser, Slalom

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Admissions Committee at USC Marshall School of Business

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Package Description:

This package is designed for aspiring medical school candidates who want to craft a compelling and standout personal statement, maximizing their chances of acceptance. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the foundation for creating a powerful personal statement. - Personal Statement Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. You'll explore various narratives to ensure your personal statement captures your true essence. - Personal Statement Drafting: Work closely with your coach to draft your personal statement, ensuring it effectively highlights your motivations, experiences, and aspirations. - Personal Statement Editing: After developing your personal statement's narrative, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the statement is polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final product is perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating a standout personal statement. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your personal statement showcases your strengths and uniqueness. Ready to craft a compelling personal statement? Let's match you with a great coach who can help you secure that coveted acceptance to a top medical school.


What you'll get from this package

A compelling personal statement that is differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful

A deeper understanding of your motivations, experiences, and aspirations, and how they align with your goal of becoming a physician

An outline and several drafts of your personal statement, refined through multiple rounds of feedback and edits

Confidence that your personal statement will stand out to medical school admissions committees

A polished final personal statement that you can feel proud of submitting and sharing with the admissions team


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Personal Statement


Alan Y.

Offered by Alan Y.

Joined March 2025

5.0

USC MD/MBA | Ex-McKinsey, Accenture, Deloitte, Kaiser, Slalom

Welcome to my profile! With a robust background in both medicine and business, I hold an MD/MBA from the University of Southern California, where I was actively involved in the admissions committee. My diverse career spans roles at top consulting firms like McKinsey & Company and Accenture, where I honed my strategic and analytical skills in healthcare. As a medical school admissions coach, I've successfully guided 18 aspiring medical students through the intricate application process, helping them secure spots at prestigious institutions. My approach is tailored to each individual's strengths and aspirations, ensuring a comprehensive and personalized strategy. Let's work together to craft an application that stands out and showcases your unique potential. Reach out to start your journey towards medical school success!

10+ people coached for Medical School

Starting at $1,187

5h+ of coaching

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