Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

Offered by Adam B.

5.0

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McKinsey, Bank of England, KPMG Experience | Oxford Economist

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Studied at University of Oxford

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Worked at McKinsey & Company

Package Description:

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Application Strategy

Essays


Adam B.

Offered by Adam B.

Joined December 2024

5.0

McKinsey, Bank of England, KPMG Experience | Oxford Economist

Hello and welcome! I hold dual Master’s degrees from the University of Oxford—an MBA and a Master’s in Public Policy—as well as a First Class Honours degree in Economics from the University of Cape Town. My academic and professional journey has equipped me with the tools to guide students through competitive admissions processes. At McKinsey & Company and KPMG, I developed expertise in strategic problem-solving and effective communication, which I now bring to my coaching practice. Having personally navigated rigorous admissions requirements and co-founded a student chapter of Effective Altruism, I understand how to highlight unique strengths and craft applications that stand out. Whether you need to refine a personal statement or map out a clear admissions strategy, I’m here to provide actionable, tailored support to help you succeed.

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5h+ of coaching

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